Peer Assessment

In the peer assessment there were three main points stated:
1) the editing on the hair round the title could be improved
2) the writing and text boxes around the writing were good 
3) when the contents page was finished it would be of a good standard

As we went round the class we would sit at a computer and write down any feedback on a small piece of paper so that any changes that were suggested to be made, or anything that we thought was good about the work was recorded easily and clearly so that the person who's work it was could easily do this. This is what was written about my work.

Today in lesson we did a peer assessment, we gave our thoughts on other peoples work and in turn received feedback on our own work, the general impression of my front page was that the image was good and matched the genre of music and that the writing was generally good. Some criticisms of my front page was that the hair near the title could use some more editing because it was noticeably cut out. The general impression of my contents page was that although unfinished the space was used well and the images were liked but the title looked like 'THS' as opposed to 'THIS' so I will change that. This peer assessment allowed me to get more ideas that I could include in my own work and helped me to improve my front page and contents page.